1. You don’t use website or non peer reviewed stuff in the lit review.
2. page number needed here – “money is, in a devastating way, at the center of all vital interests, and this is exactly the limit before which almost every human relationship fails” (Palmer et al., 2019).
3. After Adorno you need date –Adorno points out the importance
4.page number needed —which “is constituted according to the technological requirements of the production process ” (Horowitz, 2019). 5.date after Weber – Weber characterizes bureaucratic Functionalism
6. date after — Wirtz points out that, so you mention Horkheimer etc but not mentioning them in the lit review and only one reference to Adorno. Take them out from the upfront that you will utilize their Theoretical lens.
7. So your methods needs work. Descriptive then you are doing surveys??? rework it completely.
8. Your survey questionnaire also it is odd so fix it and it is quantitative so there is mismatch between methods and everything else.
